增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Chaparral Middle School is a public school in California, that was opened in 1976. We serve approximate 1350 students in grades 6-8 now. Regular school hours are from 7:45 am to 1:55 pm. Chaparral offers different learned programs all centered around student success and achievement, as evidenced by the honors from that we have received throughout the years. Our school was honoring as a California Distinguished School in 1994. Many another programs make Chaparral Middle School an unique place of learning. One example was our outdoor education program. These experience give students the opportunity have memorable learning practice.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Square dancing bus been more and more popular with the elderly as their living conditions improve, Most people thought it can help people take regularly exercise and strengthen their fitness. Besides, it provides people more chances to take activity outdoors. However, some people argue that the music is very noisy, that disturbs the surrounding citizens' normal life. Also, be exposed to such loud noise may do a harm to their health in the long run.

    In my opinion, square dancing is a good form of exercise, so dancers should take our neighbors' needs into consideration. If they choose a right time and turn down the music, it will cause fewer trouble for others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My name is Li Ming, a student studied in Ganzhou No. 18 Middle School. I am eager become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have a real talent on singing. I get the first prize in the singing competition in our school last year. However, I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, that will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always be ready to help. Helping other people makes myself happy. I believe I can make friend with the children. I hope I am fortunately enough to be a member of your group.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As is reported that 7 billionth baby was born in October 31^st, 2011. However, people don't seem to be happier about the news. The earth had become too crowed. People are suffering from various problems such as lack for resources, poverty, starvation and so on. Great damage has been causing to earth as human beings struggle for more living space.

    I am worried the future of our planet. I hope all the country cooperate and take measures to prevent the population from growing too fast. Besides, people should use natural resources more effective. After all, we have the only one earth.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A spokesman for uniform suppliers say that many of us have a huge variety of clothes in our wardrobe, and picking what to wear can be a nightmare. First, you have to consider of the dress code where you work or where you were going. You also have to consider whether an outfit is practice and suitable for the weather. You don't want wear something which is inappropriate or too casual, but for the same time you don't want to appear over-dressed. The study of 2,000 women found that the average woman spent more than 12 minutes each morning choose what to wear. But for some, the figure could be much high.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Saturday, I visit my elder sister, who has a four-year-old daughter, Lisa. I was about to tell me niece the story "Snow White" while my sister stopped me immediately and gave me another storybook. When I asked her if she had told Lisa the story, she shook her head and said, "I don't think girl today should listen to this story." I was confusing. Later, she explained why. In the story, Snow White does nothing to rescue herself. Instead, she depends others' help. My sister doesn't want her daughter to be a person which likes turning to others for help. She is wants Lisa to learn to be brave and independence. That's how my sister doesn't want to tell her such stories as "Snow White".