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Last July, my parents and I went to
visit my aunt and uncle. At the day of our flight, we had to wake up very
early. When we checked our bag in, we found one of them broken, but fortunate
we were on our way on time. My favorite experience was our visit to Mount
Rainier, which was nothing like I have expected.
When we left, my aunt lent us sunhats,
but I thought it would be very hot. Imagine her surprise when I found the
mountain top covering with snow. We walked along a small path beyond the main
trails increase our chances of seeing wildlife. Small wild flowers grew up
through the snow, underneath that we could hear a small stream. Little animals
stood still to avoid from being noticed. It was the most beautiful sight that I
had ever seen.