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John, a heavy smoker,
once feel bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he
turned to his doctor for help. "Quit smoking," the doctor advised.
Find the advice sensible from several points, such as money, healthy, and
cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hour without
a cigarette, John was nervous and had a difficulty in concentrating,
inability to sleep, what made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to
himself, "One more, I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable
day of me to break away from the bad habit…" Then he picked up a cigarette
which made her relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it
"tomorrow". Today John is still addicted for smoking.