增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Diary,

    Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He is lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school and just everything else I love in the world. To make things bad, now I have to share a room to my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am very tiring, but I know I'll never fall asleep.

    Good night or remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir of my past life and my only friend.

Yours

Rosemary

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My time travel trip was certainly an exhausting one. A company, well-known as its expertise, transported us into a future in a time capsule. It swung gentle sideways as we lay relaxing and dreaming. However, as soon as we arrived, we were shocked at the terrible surrounding and hit by a lack of fresh air. Besides, “time lag” kept me got flashbacks from my previous time period for the first few days, that made me nervous. Flying a carriage was not easy, either. Problems arose the moment when we reached a large market. With too many carriages flying by in all directions, my friend and guide, Wang Ping, swept up into the centre of it! What was I supposed to do?

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2）每句只允许修改1处，多者不计分；

3）改错格式不对不给分

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I have always remembered visiting my aunt and uncle who live in a countryside. One time, we drive down from the city to their house. We were stopped to rest once or twice on the way because the journey was such long. By the time we arrived it was dark and it was difficult see much. I remember getting out of the car and step into a pool of water. I immediately regretted wearing my best shoe because they became dirty. My mother tried to clean them, so it was hopeless. I cried for hours afterwards. But now look back, I consider it a both funny and happily memory in my childhood.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Every year, my parents and I pay visit to my grandparents in my hometown.

    To be honestly, I didn't want to go this year. You know, my hometown in their memory was so dirty. Rubbish could be seen everywhere, that annoyed me a lot. After thinking for some moment, I asked my parents that whether we could let my grandparents come and stay with us. Heard this, they just smiled.

    When I got on the bus, I was surprised to find that the village was very clean that I hardly recognized it. Then I decide to visit my grandparents more often.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady of deformed(畸形的) hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that she wanted. She asked me for some money. She said I hadn't eaten anything since that morning. I gave her some money and she happy went to a food stand and had her food. It made me realize we went shopping without think twice then forget all about it in a few day. However, there are people don't even have money to get a meal. I hope to spreading kindness to those in need in any way possible.