增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Are you afraid of delivering a speech before people?I can well remember his first speech which was titled A Real Test in My Life at the age of 9!You can't imagine how terrible shy I was the moment I thought of that—with so many eyes fixed in me.I have no choice but prepare for it,though.When a real moment came,I stood on the platform with my legs trembled and my mind blank.Although it was hard for me to find myself back,but I made it!From then on,I gradually turned out to be a great speakers without any fear of talking.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)，不计分。

    Edison was a great scientist or inventor. As may not be known to many people, born in a peasant families, he received few school education. He started to go to school at age of eight and remain at school for only three months. It's said that he always asked some strange questions which his teachers couldn't answer them. In fact, he was a man full with imagination. He made over 2,000 inventions in his life, covered many fields, such as the electric lamp, film, etc. He played an important part to the social develop and the progress of human beings.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(／＼), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Miss Brown,

    We have received your application last week. We regret to in forming you that our company has hired other girl for the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, we decided that we should need someone with more office experience for this particular position. You have impressed on your desire to learn and your ability work hard. But we do hope that you will apply for the position in our company sometime in a future. We would like to thank you for your interesting in our company. Please contact them if there are any further questions.

Yours,

John Smith

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

    As is known to all, there's increasing number of foreign students coming to China. For example, Violet from Zambia was receiving financial help to study Mandarin at Beijing University at present. Seen many Africans studying in China, she feels extreme inspired. She is also excited by the level of the development in China. As plan, she will study Mandarin for the first year. Then she will go to another school to take courses on Chinese medicine next year and those class will be taught in Mandarin. Most African students express his satisfaction about the Chinese education. Salum from Tanzani studying political science in Shanghai will return back to help his home country before graduation and getting a diploma. He wants to be a link among the Chinese and the people of Tanzania.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During the last Spring Festival, I get lots of money by snatching(抢)the red envelope through WeChat. But now I am losing in thought — whether it really does good to people, especial young children, since the smartphone is now so popular. From his point of view, it will do more harms than good to young children unless they are addicted to snatching the red envelope. On the one hand, they will think it's such easy to get much money. Just by snatching they can get it. On other hand, spending too much time on the things that they have nothing to do with their studies will never benefit them. It's bad for either young people's mental health but physical health.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike for a birthday present.

    As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body build up. Meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which was helpful in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally friendly means of transport. It is convenient to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere is the most important. Don't hesitate, and trying to take action. I really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.

Best wishes!

Li Hua