增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always gives me some advice,but I seldom took them seriously.One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition.So I signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be full prepared.But the moment I stood on the stage,I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful.Then,my dad said,"My son,life is like battlefield.You have to lose many time to win the final victory."Thanks for his advice,I never give up when I do anything.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Sunday, I went to a shop to have my watch repair. After checking the watch, the shop assistant said she would call her manager to see that if this kind of problem could be fixed. As I was waiting the response from the manager, I saw an old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to the counter. No one seems to have noticed him, so I went over to his wheelchair and offered to give him some helps. Kindly as I was, I found that I could do something to help him. At that moment, the assistant replied that it would cost myself much money to fix this problem. I was very sad and about to leave the shop while the old man said, “You are a nice and thoughtful boy, but I would like to help you pay for it.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I've just returned back from my spring break after visit my brother America. His school had just finished their break, so I get a chance to pay a visit to it. At the front door which there was a special machine, he had to call a security guard to take me to the main office to get a special pass. Then, dog smelt me by its nose. There were cameras anywhere, except in the bathrooms. I felt like I was a thief. Personally, I don't think a school need to be like a prison. It should be a comfortable place for student to study in happy.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⑴每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⑵只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from an art orphanage or had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children not until they grew up, and the results were shocked. The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently. The only difference between the life of these children ­ the love, made a great difference to us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of poster in my community on which read "Green Community, Beautiful Home" I found the activity quite meaningfully and decided to take part.

    Since my mom was fond of flowers, we choose Chinese roses. With everything preparing, I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered it.

    Now looking after plant has become part of my life. This way, I can feel the simple pleasure of life but harvest a sense of achievement. The seedlings are grown little by little, and I can't help picturing what beautiful our neighborhood will be when all the flowers come out.