增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who had a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed and return it to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lot but finally became a famous writer in his time. Though the rich man had such many books, he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Living without an aim is like sailing without compass. If there is no aim, we will get lose. Last term, I couldn't accept the truth which I failed in my math examination. I decided to give it up, so I skipped from classes frequently. Considered my case, my teacher offered me several detailed approach and advised me to set a short-term goal to improve my math. Finally, I work harder than ever and made great progress in her math. In my opinion, success lies in a series of goals. However, we should remember to make our targets clearly and try our best to realize our dreams.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to a bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked by a passing car,that drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid and I joined in with hesitation.Luckily,she was not bad injured and we send her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society,I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    There is too many people and too many pollution on the earth. If we moved to the moon one day，how would life be like there?

    In my opinion, life would be much more comfort on the moon than on the earth. There wouldn't be pollution or traffic jam. We could go wherever we like in one minute by the spaceship, which would be much fast than a train or an airplane. We would eat whatever you like without being concerned unhealthy ingredients. This is a place where I am always dreaming about.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把 多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起 ）不计分。

   I'll never to forget my favorite teacher from second grade, Miss Wang. I loved her so much I wanted to become a teacher just like him one day. At home I would make my own classroom for which I would teach my dolls. I believed that teach students would give me lots of fun. As the result, I really did become a public-school teacher. I taught elementary school（小学）at first. Although I had a degree in education, I found I wasn't total prepared for teaching —the job was much hard than I thought. It's difficult to teach students of different level well.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day that I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. If my friend had not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I decided to learn to swim. I didn't attend to any training class but learned it all for myself. And now I have no difficulty swimming at all. Because the way I swim looks awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.