增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Music is the international language．The songs sung or playing by instruments are beautiful to people everywhere. Popular music in America is that every student likes. Students carry small radios with earphones, but listen to music before class, after class, and at lunch. There are other kinds music that are important to Americans. One is called folk music, it tells stories about common life of Americans. Another is called western or country music, started by cowboys whom would sing to the cows they were watching out. Today, any music about the love between a country boy and his girl friend are called western or country music.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Hello, everybody! I'm honored to be here sharing my ideas on high school life to you. First, we should try our best to develop good qualities, such as being actively. Additionally, get along well with others can never be ignored, that can help us make good friends and live a happy life. Second, studying effectively really count. A good habit like reviewing is of great important to the challenging study. Third, we should never forget to join sports and outdoor activities. Being energetic, I have dealt with my life more confident. I hope what I have been shared can help you lead the better life in senior high school. Wish everything a great success. That's all. Thank you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The writing class had just began. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be announce to read his or her paragraphs aloud. Some of us are confident to take part this class activity, while others were nervous. Though I had done my homework well, but I was afraid to speak before a large group of people. My father once said, "The classroom is a place where includes learning from my courage." Remembering which my father had said, I raised my hand immediate.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I seldom have the chance to talk native English speakers, even though I have learned English for many years. Last year my school has a cultural exchange program and there were some foreign students came to study in my school. I was lucky to become the foreign student's partner. My job was to help him solve daily problem. At first, I was much nervous that I couldn't speak very fluent when we talked in English. However, my partner encouraged me or listened patiently. As we communicated more, he taught me some interesting idioms, which made me to sound like a native speaker. How a valuable experience!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear peter,

    I'm more than happy to hearing from you and grateful for your advices. As we know, a great number of students has improved their studies by taking part in weekend classes. And I won't do so, because of I think it's not suitable for me. Weekend classes often focus on lots of exercises and teachers give lessons at a fast speed. It's not good for a student like me who doesn't have a good command of basically knowledge. What's more, it will cost a lot of money if I took part in weekend classes, that will increase the economic burden of my parents.

    As for improve my study, I will change my learning method and pay more attention to the understanding of basic knowledge. If necessary, I will ask my classmates and teachers help me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua