增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    We are now living in a information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are wide used. It seem that many people cannot enjoy themselves without it. However, if I were to give up one of them, I would rather turn off TV than to switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows took my fancy and there are too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are available elsewhere, either. As for cells and the Web, they are less necessary for me. I need a cell to keep in touch my friend and my family.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike most in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very unpleasant in winter that it is cold and wind is blowing heavily. It can also be very dangerously. Of course I will be very careful in my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. One day I went to school and come back to find the front wheel was missed. Worse still, it was the long walk to the repairer's shop.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每次错误及其修改均仅限一词

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors standing in front of ticket window.We waited for a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park.I was too eager to see the fierce frightening animals that I quickened his steps through the crowd.Unfortunate,I got separated from my parent.I had a hard time looking for them,and I had no luck.Wandering in the park,I felt alone without any companions.Worse still,I had no money,so I had to walk home,covered as for as 5 kilometers.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在 其下面 写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

    Mary has a strong interested in Chinese, but she does not study very hardly. She often makes some mistakes when she speaks the Chinese. She's good at maths and spends much time work at it every day. She likes to do experiments, but sometime she can not pay enough attention to the teacher's instructions. Physics is subject she likes most. She always does his best to study it and she is one of the best student in class. She gets along well with her teachers and classmates and is always ready help others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fit in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestion may be helpful.

    First, I thought you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possibly. With this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be an good idea for you to take part in more activities, that usually involve in team-work and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, facing with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer him some sensible suggestions.

    I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do help, please let me know.