增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mao Zedong once wrote a poem in which he dreams of "walls of stone of hold clouds and rains tills a smooth lake rises in the narrow gorges".Now his dreams have been come true.The power of the Yangtze River has been harnessed by the Three Gorges Dam.Most of China's energy is produced by burning coal,that causes serious air pollution and increases global warming.Therefore,the dam will generate electricity equals to about 40 millions tons of coal without causing so many pollution.The reservoir has flooded a lot of cities and towns.More than a million of people has moved form their homes.About 800 historical relics have been submerged.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news home and abroad and got as much informations as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Besides, your ability to operate the computer can be improved great. So we should not be addicted to the Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroying. In addition, we should keep off the harm websites. Anyhow, this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Everyone tends to have many problems while gaining knowledges．Therefore，your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out．What I'd like share is my approaches to solving the problems．

    First，you must focus on which you are faced with．There seems to be a lot of attractive things，like computers or game．To stay focused，you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work．Second，believe to yourself．Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning，but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence．

    Last，keep active．Never fee1 worrying to turn to your teachers or classmates．Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher．

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I'm a senior student and I'm now in the need of your help although I can't stand the great pressure.

    Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Beside, we don't even have enough sleepy. There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don't do our best we won't have the chance to go to university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Mr. Green, which is a photography lover, often takes photos in parks. One day, he was taking photos with his wife in a park when an argument attract his attention. While he was trying to figure out of what was going on, a man suddenly grabbed her bag of photography equipment and ran away. Mr. Green shouted at the man but ran after him with his wife. Unfortunate, Mr. Green didn't catch up him and then he called the police. The police said it was not the first time when photography equipment had been stolen from visitors in the park. They promised to help search for Mr. Green's bag and reminded other visitor to be careful when take photos in public.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加 词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.