增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear parents,

    The hardest time of my life is coming, and I know you are worry about my studies and my life. I can say nothing and thanks to you for the special occasion. Words failed me when I want to express my thanks to you for the care you showed me in the past few years. These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my ability in the tests. I'll try your best to accomplish my assignment in the coming days.

    After the college entrance examination, I intend to helping you do some housework, that I have seldom done before. And I want to learn to cook in order to personal prepare a dinner for you both.

    My dear parents, everything is going well with me. do to relax!

    Love from,

    Your son

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Breaking traffic rules and littering are common in these days, caused serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation required everyone's effort. As for me, I'll keep traffic law in mind all the way to school. If I ride the bicycle, I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road when the traffic light turns green. If l walk, I'll never forget to use thepedestrian crossing. However, I'll regard that as my duty to help keep our environment clean. Not only I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I'll also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possibly.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The sentence from our teachers tell us that we shouldn't be discouraged after failures. Definitely we should keep trying with determine.

    At the age of twelve, I get a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. Besides, it was harder than expecting. The bike seemed too heavy for me to control and I fell off the bike over and over again. I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I found me doing better and better. Looking back, I feel I would not be able to ride bike if I had lost my heart.

    Honest speaking, we can't avoid failing. What matters most is that we should stick to it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    We all make mistakes and they are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may have a big difference. I still remember that my spoken English improved. In beginning, I always kept silent in the oral class to prevent myself from make mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about his situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to say regardless of mistakes. Whenever I have made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmate would help me figure up how I could avoid them in the future. With time going by, I gradually made progress and now I can talk fluent in English. However, we just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes in order to improve our English.