Last night, when watched the annual Ten People Who Moved Chinese the Most in the CCTV, I learn some deeds of helping the poor children. It makes me have a firm belief what there are still many kind but generous people around us. It is common believed that many children in the remote mountainous areas of our country have few opportunity to receive education for various reasons. Now that we have the chance receive a good education, we should treasure them. As far as I'm concerned about, if we are friendly and help each other, we can live harmonious and happy life together.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habit，which do great harm to their health．

    As we all know it，health is more important than wealth．Without a healthy body，you cannot do everything even if you are a millionaire．In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones．

    First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day．You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins．Secondly，getting enough sleep．Early to bed and early to rise make you feel great all day long．Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong．

    As long as you form regularly habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and live the healthy life．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently, as the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language called the Web Language. Our class had a discussion about if we should welcome to the Web Language the other day. Forty percent of the students think it ridiculously. In their opinions, it does no good to helping people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English. Besides, it'll make Chinese less standard, finally ruined our mother tongue. However, sixty percent of our class is fond of it. We think that it is simple, convenient, and helpful in expressing their thoughts. Personally, it's not good habit to use the Web Language. It may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstand.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

    I am more than happier to know you got the first prize in the speech contest. I'm writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.

    It is known to all, success lie in hard work. I think you must have been practiced a lot. And at the same time you must have gained much valuable skills. Could you please help me but tell me what I should pay attention when I speak in public? You know, when made a speech, I always get nervously. I would appreciate it if you can give me some advices.

    Please write to me as soon as you can.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）画掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    English is very important for us, so many students don't know what to learn it well. Many student even show no interest to it. Two years ago, my English was poor and I don't know what to do. My teacher knew I loved the music very much, so she suggested that I listened to a lot of English songs. I followed her advices. Later, I fell in love with English. In order to better understanding the songs, I started learning English hard. Now I can speak English fluent. If you also want learn English well, you can listen to some English songs, too.