假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering
make up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike for a birthday
present.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor
health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body
build up. Meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which was helpful
in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally
friendly means of transport. It is convenient to get around as well. Apart from
giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as traveling,
seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being
sincere is the most important. Don't hesitate, and trying to take action. I
really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.
Best
wishes!
Li
Hua