假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    While I was taking a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new movie with one of my favorite actors in last Sunday morning. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. Unfortunate, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene. And the actors couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in front of me! I couldn't believe my luck— not only did I have my photo taken with her, but he signed his name on my shirt！

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

    注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第1处起）不计分。

Dear Paul,

    I really can't thank you very much for your invitation.

    I do want to accept them and take this opportunity to introduce traditional Chinese paintings to foreign friends, but I'm sorry to inform you that I can't. The reason is because I am busy preparing myself for the coming College Entrance Examination. As for the introduction speech, I strongly recommend my friend Anna, that is the most suitable choice to take my place on next Sunday. She begun to learn paintings at an early age and has good knowledge of traditional Chinese paintings. However, her active personality and perfect spoken English will help making your activity a success.

    Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wish to you.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；不按要求方式改的不给分！2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In recent years, more and more parents send their children to famous schools, thought it can ensure that their children can be admitted by better universities after graduation.

    It is true that famous schools are furnishing with better teaching facilities. What's more, teachers are excellent, that come from all over the country and even abroad. They have the ability make classes more lively and interesting, so students will be able to accept knowledge better. Besides, not every student is fit to go to famous schools where there is a fierce competition among students. And students there have to work much harder than that in ordinary schools.

    I suggest effective measures are taken to make sure all the schools provide equal good education. Only in this way can all the students have equal rights to receive quality education.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

修改：在所需修改的词下面划横线( __ )，并写出修改后的词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The other day I saw a beautiful dress at a shop and fall in love with it. I tried it on and found it fit perfect so I bought it! My favorite thing about the dress is that it has such many pockets that I don't need take a bag any more. I also get lots of attentions from my friends whenever I wear it, that makes me proud. What's funny is that the style is very similar with what people wore back in the 1990s. In the fact, I have found some old photographs of my mother wear a similar dress. It's really amazing that we've started to wear things that was popular about twenty years ago.