增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream was put forward by President Xi. And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people's life but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I can try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor.

    I believe hard work is that it takes to accomplish my goal.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

    I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Everyone tends to have many problems while gaining knowledges．Therefore，your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out．What I'd like share is my approaches to solving the problems．

    First，you must focus on which you are faced with．There seems to be a lot of attractive things，like computers or game．To stay focused，you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work．Second，believe to yourself．Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning，but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence．

    Last，keep active．Never fee1 worrying to turn to your teachers or classmates．Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we will set off together from the school gate. The farm workers gave we a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us up. What glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing good. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After short rest, we had great fun sing and dancing, telling jokes and stories. Two of us even play a game of chess. Therefore, the time passed quickly and we had to say goodbye to the worker.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people liked to use it to express the strong desires they have for our future. Some young people dream of become scientists when others wish to become astronauts.

    In my opinion, what matter most is that we should be responsible our society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a strongly sense of responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble. Beside, I will learn modestly from those devoting themselves to our society. I do hope all of us can make every efforts to live our dreams.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was Sunday yesterday. I didn't need go to school. So together with my friend, I went on a picnic. Carrying a bag of food, we set it out. The sky was blue but the air was fresh to breathe. We were very excited. All of the sudden, I felt my bike became very heavy. I realize there must have been something wrong with it. Sure enough, one of the tires got flatter. I had no choice but to walk. However, with two friends around me, I didn't feel disappointed. Late, a truck driver volunteered to get my bike repair. I was really lucky to meet such kind a man.