文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

    One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

    That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm angry to see some schoolmates throw away food in the school canteen, which make me very concerned. As is we all know, there are still a lot of people who don't have enough food to eat. Even many people are suffering from hungry every day. In addition, food is a kind of limiting resource. To save food can better preserve our resource and protect the environment.

    However, it's high time that we should say no to those waste food and realize the importance of saving food. Don't order too many next time! When you are eating, you should eat up all your food, try your best to reduce the waste. Let's join our hands together to build a economized campus!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I had an argument with my friend Ben yesterday because his favorite movie, which I thought was not interested. After the argument, he went off without say goodbye to me. I was so angry on him. In the afternoon I started to feel sad because he is my best friend. After school, I asked him if he wanted to go with me as usually. He gave me a strange look and turned away. But, this time, he does say good bye to me quietly. Later, while I was watching TV at home, the phone rang. This was Ben and he was sorry for that he did. He felt like childish. I said never mind. Now I feel much better since we are still good friend.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Steven,

    From your letter, I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following advice may be for some help to you.

    To begin with, walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talk you will happy find that they ate likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually, you will enjoy each other company. Besides, you'd better to give them a hand when they are in trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities, which you can communicate with different people.

    All in all if you follow my advice above, you would find that it isn't big deal to make some friends.

Yours,

Jack

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Monday, we hold a monitor election during our class meeting. Two students in our class took part the event. They are Liu Dong and Wang Hong, all of whom are the top students in our grade. Before the election, they each gave a briefly presentation about their plan after become the monitor. At the last, the winner turned out to be Wang Hong, who gained 28 votes when Liu Dong gained 15. Obviously, we thought Wang Hong's plan a good one. In the end, we gave Wang Hong a big hand but congratulated her. I expect that our class will be better under his leadership.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck — not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!