增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Uncle Lee is my neighbor. He can't see things well because his bad eyesight, but he doesn't go out very often. Last Friday he had an important letter to post to, so Uncle Lee had to go out himself. He was walking in the street while suddenly the strong wind came up and blew his black hat off his head. The hats rolled and flew, and Uncle Lee had to running after it. Just then a woman in front of him shout at him, “What are you doing?” “Trying to catch my hat,” answered Uncle Lee. “What? Your hat?” cried out the woman angry. “Can't you see that it is our black pet dog?”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Mr. Smith offers us some advice on how to write a good composition, which include the following steps.

    Firstly, we should read the topic careful and organize our ideas. then we start to shape our thoughts in our own words and finish our writing in the giving time. Before that, we have to check our compositions, paying attention to grammar and spelling. It is very important to read them aloud to myself or someone else from beginning to end. Lastly, we had better to ask our teachers or classmates for advice on why to improve our writing. If possibly, we may leave them alone for some time before reading again, it will help a great deal.

    I hope you will benefit the advice above a lot.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Square dancing bus been more and more popular with the elderly as their living conditions improve, Most people thought it can help people take regularly exercise and strengthen their fitness. Besides, it provides people more chances to take activity outdoors. However, some people argue that the music is very noisy, that disturbs the surrounding citizens' normal life. Also, be exposed to such loud noise may do a harm to their health in the long run.

    In my opinion, square dancing is a good form of exercise, so dancers should take our neighbors' needs into consideration. If they choose a right time and turn down the music, it will cause fewer trouble for others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My fire department captain, Mike, who is always ready to serve for others, has a brain disease. Last week, we raised money for him and his family to help them with medically expenses. Many people also came to us to write message to Mike on a white board. Beside, we downloaded many photos of friends, encouraged words, and beautiful photos of our area onto a digital device. We make a video with all the things. Yesterday, we went to the hospital and gave a board and the video our captain. Our goal is: unless he gets discouraged or feels lonely, he can play the video to remind him of all the people who love and care for us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm more than delight to know you are curious about the club activities of school and want to join one club next term. I'd like to recommend Peking opera club to you, from what I believe you will enjoy a lot.

    I recommended this club to you for the following reasons. First, Peking opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art. Join his club can give him a taste of Chinese traditional art forms. In addition, the club will regularly organize variously activities. Considering your interest in Chinese history, I believe getting close Peking opera will also be a good way of learning more about it.

    When it comes to preparation, and you can watch some famous Peking opera videos on the Internet or read some relevant materials, which will definitely be of great beneficial to you. If you want to learn more about it, don't hesitate to contacting me.