增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    On a cold winter night, it was snowing heavily, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help come. All of them were thankful with his help.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

    I am glad to tell you that I will attend to the English speech contest to be held in Beijing next month. It is complete a great opportunity for me to improving myself. And now I am trying your best to make preparations for it. Therefore, I have some difficulty collecting relevant information and putting what I have learned into practice, where bothers me a lot. In addition, I had no idea how I can attract the audience's attention. I would appreciate if you could do me a favor.

    By the way, after a contest, I am to drop in at your universities to visit you.

Yours truly,

Li Jin

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I went to London for a visit two weeks before. While walked in Hyde Park one morning, I found an ID card of a Frenchman on the ground. There is nobody around, so I figured that it was best to pick them up. The moment I got back to my hotel, I searched for the owners online, and found a Facebook account that exact matched his picture. It was happened that his phone number was in the account, but I sent him a message with a photo of the ID card. He wrote back to me with no time. And next day he picked up the ID card from the hotel's front desk.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,

    Good news travels fast! I am glad to hear that you were admitted to Yale University. Please accept my sincere congratulation on your success.

    I knew how hard you have been working for these years but I am very proud of you for your success. I am sure that it was just your hard work which finally led your success today. Just as the old saying go, "No pains, no gains". I strong believe that you will make a greater progress in your future studies and work.

    At the end of your letter, I'd like to give my best wishes to you! And I am looking forward to see you before long.

Yours,

Lily

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错 词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is known to all, sports are playing a more and more important role in people's life. Last week a sports program was hold in our school. All the students took an active part in all kind of sports, such as football, basketball, run, swimming, bike riding and so on. They competed against each other and cheer for each other as well. They said they were fond with such a program.

    I also enjoyed it a lot of and I think we students should do sports every day. They can not only build up our bodies but also helped us study more efficient. Only in this way will we lead healthy and wonderful life.