增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

    My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．

    At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

    My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Black,

    I'm Tim, the exchange student from China. I had been studying in your school for a year. I am deep moved by the kindness of people around. That I want to say first is that the teachers here are very friendly. They do what they can help me and encourage me to study hard. Whenever I ask for questions, they give satisfactory answers. Besides, my classmates offer me a lot of help, too. We get on well with each other and I have made quite a few good friend. At home, Walter's parents take good care of me, treating me as if I am their own child.

    I'm so grateful for all these people, with whom help I have been accustomed to American culture and gained a lot of knowledge.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Everyone tends to have many problems while gaining knowledges．Therefore，your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out．What I'd like share is my approaches to solving the problems．

    First，you must focus on which you are faced with．There seems to be a lot of attractive things，like computers or game．To stay focused，you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work．Second，believe to yourself．Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning，but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence．

    Last，keep active．Never fee1 worrying to turn to your teachers or classmates．Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As a senior three student, it won't take long after I graduate. Now, I have many to share with my fellow students.

    Firstly, I'd like to show my appreciation to those who stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends including. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I've made my mind to make every effort to study, for hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my hope that all the young fellow can make full use of time, because time and tide waiting for no man.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Wangping,

    How are things going with you? It's been six month since you studied abroad in England.

    It is the first time that you had been abroad. Without doubt, it is hard to fit in the life in a foreign country. Have you got accustom to living there? And how about the food? As an exchange student, have you overcome all the difficulties you have learn English? Can you understand that the teachers say in class and communicate free with your classmates now? You are such smart that you must have made a rapid progress in your studies. Everything is OK with me. I often recall the happy days that we stayed together.

    I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua