增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    When I look at this picture of myself， I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sarah,

    Thank you for ask me about Qianmen Street. Vm glad tell you something about it. Qianmen Street, that is more than 800 meters long and has a history of over 600 years, is a famous street. There are about 300 shops along both side of it. So it is easy for you to buy which you need. Since it lies just to the south of Tian'anmen Square, the transportation is very conveniently. Not only Buses No. 17 and 59 but also Subway Line 2 carry you there. Qianmen Street was well-known as a walking street, so you can also take horse-drawn cars to teahouses or theatres where you can learn much about Chinese culture and lifestyle. I believe you can have a fun here.

    Welcome to Beijing!

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficulty maths problem in class. Though an answer seemed a little strange, but nobody doubted it except me. Thinking that his answer might wrong, I carefully studied the problem and tried to work them out in a different way. Half an hour late, I managed to find the correct answer. When I show my answer to him, my teacher praised me of my independent thinking.

    From this experiences I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that help us to find the truth.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Sunday, sixty students from our school pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum.

    The museum, which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology, covers area of 48,000 square meters. The moment when we entered the museum, the exhibition caught their attention. In the museum, we saw the latest progresses in science and technology. Moreover, we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves. What appealed for us most was the 3D film that made us feel we were in real events.

    Though the visiting time was slight short, we gained a lot. It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear officer，

    I am writing ask for your help. I take flight CA983 from Beijing to Los Angeles yesterday. I left a black bag on my seat because of my careless. There are many important things in it, include my passport, credit card and $1,000. And the most important thing is my notebook, that has all my clients' phone numbers.

    Though this bag is very important to me, my friends advised me to write to him. Hope you can help me find out the lost bag. I will real appreciate your help. If you get any informations about my lost bag, please contact me at 800­4006­2121.

Yours faithfully,

Will Smith

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Writing was my favorite class at school. My teacher, Bebe Usi, was devoting and encouraging. We each spent several classes make a paper mask and wore it when reading our own work before the class. I have forgotten that composition now, but I remember the feeling of mask on my face and my heart was beating wild as I shared my composition. I was afraid of but proud. I have written many compositions before that but none of which had been chosen to be read before the class. They perhaps weren't the best composition and the most beautiful mask in my class. But they both were my.