假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jeremy has a large circle of friends and is very
popular at parities. Everybody admire him for his great sense of humor.
Recently, one of Jememy's closest friend asked him to make a speech at a
wedding reception. This is the sort of thing that Jeremy loves. He prepared the
speech careful and went to the wedding with his daughter, Jenny. He included a
large number of funny stories in the speech and of course, it was great success.
As soon as he finished, Jenny told him she wants to go home. Jeremy was a
little disappointing at this but he did as if his daughter asked. On the way
home, he asked Jenny if he enjoyed the speech. In his surprise, she said she
didn't. Jeremy asked her why it was so and she told him that she didn't like to
see so many people laughed at him.