注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it. The voice at the bottom of my heart said, “Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”

    It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn't do very well in all my English exams. Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to accept this reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2).只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    It is great for me to know you like Tai Chi and are willing to learn them before long. I'm sure I can give you hand happily.

    Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been wide admitted as a healthy sport. Knowing for its well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provided the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so necessary in our modern lives. Because it is hard to learn, Tai Chi is beneficial for your health and mind.

    Concerning about your learning place and trainer, I'm proud to tell you what I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi which is always invited to teach others all over the country.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    We may have different opinion in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to dealing with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to them. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others and also learn to express myself clear.

    Once we were discussing why to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nice place. I manage to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time on that day. Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Every one of us are thinking about the future.I have decided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sounds surprising?

    I have had this dream when I was a child.I love children.I don't think to deal with them all years round is just wasting time.On contrary, to me it means happiness.Like we all can see, teachers are badly needed in our country, and not many of us want to become teachers.One of the main reason is that teachers work too hard but get too little.In spite of that, I'm determining to devote all my life into the cause of education.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 （＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One morning I was having walk in the park when I saw Mr. Wang, my friend's father. He was sitting alone on a roadside bench. I went up to him and wish him a good morning. Delighting to see me, he had invited me to sit next to him. He said, "I'm retired now but I often feel lonely." This hit me hardly and I wondered how to do to make his life different. I knew he was a painter, so I asked a lots about his painting experiences. Finally, I asked him, "Can you teach us to paint?" He agreed happily and now every other day, I go to learn to painting.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    How an unbelievable scene! A modern young couple were eating fruit in public and had thrown a plenty of waste on the ground. When an old cleaner comes to clean up, the man was very angry. He pointed at the cleaner, said in a loud voice, “How impolite! They haven't finished eating!” “How could people behave such badly?” I thought. Obvious, in their eyes, they could do all they liked and ignore others' feelings. In my opinion, we should pay attention our behavior, obey public rules and respect others' works. We should know that really civilized people are those who have good manners but a beautiful mind all the time.