增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

    As far as I know it, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercises by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship. Beside, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It's convenient him to get around as well.

    Apart from giving him the gift, you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere was the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处。

    We use both words and body language express our thoughts and opinions and to communicate with other peoples. We can learn a lot of about what a person is thinking by watch his or her body language. Words are important, but the way a person stands, folds his or her arms, or moved his or her hands can also give us informations about his or her feelings. Just like speaking language, body language vary from culture to culture. Making eye contact — looking directly in someone's eyes — is in some countries a way to show interest. In another countries, however, eye contact is a way to show that a person is rude or disrespectful.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am very fond of watching movies. When I'm free, the first thing I'd like do is buy some snacks and then found a hot movie to watch. Before watching so many movies, I'm impressing by The Lord of the Rings most. This movie has three series and I like it all. Though the movie was shot many years ago, it is still not out of the date. It was shot in New Zealand, and the scenery in the movie is such beautiful that I can't move my eye away every time I watch it. I plan to travel to New Zealand in what I can have a look on the beautiful scenery.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It's a long and bored journey. But at the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it. The streets are clean and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind blow on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Good afternoon, my dear friends! Today the number of the netizens in our country have increased rapidly, yet much of them do not pay enough attention to the family. There's no doubt that we are benefit much from the Internet. For example; it's convenient of us to get the information we need and communicate with our friend and relatives. Meanwhile, it can help us learn that is happening both at home and abroad. However, no matter how attractively the Internet is, we shouldn't separated from our loved ones. Therefore, just for a moment, we should stop surfing the Internet and spending time with our families, enjoying the time when we were together. So just remember this: don't let the keyboard separate you from your loved ones.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays, it is fashionable for young student to use iPads. With an iPad, we can listen to music and download much learning material to read. Obviously, it's of great benefit to their studies, especially to improve our English listening skills. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom to listen to music with earphones, but some even play video games, which make teachers and students very annoyed. In my opinion, the classroom was a place to study and concentration is great needed. Therefore, we should make a good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons. Meanwhile, which schools should do is make some rules help the students use iPads properly.