增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, I spent my lucky money on the special gift for my grandma. Early in the morning, I went to a cellphone store and choose a cellphone with large buttons specially designing for seniors. I gave it to my grandma when I visited her at the weekend. On receive the cellphone, my grandma was very happy and eager to learn why to use it. I patiently explained several important function she needed. My grandma learned carefully and wanted have a try. With my help, she successful called one of her friends. That afternoon, my grandma proudly told her neighbors that she must make calls with the new cellphone I bought it her. They all praised how thoughtful I was.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When I was having supper last summer,I saw white cat in the yard.It was so cute that I couldn't help play with it.It was nervous at first,and soon we became good friends.One day when it jumped to my room,I decided to gave it a warm bath,because it fur was dirty.As time goes by,the weather turned to cold gradually.It had to leave to find a warmly place,and it would continue its journey.Whenever I wish to see it,that I must do is to close my eye,and it will appear in front of me.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I had an amazed experience last Spring Festival. On the second day of the holiday, it was snowing heavily but we had a very important relative to visit, which lived in a distant mountain village. We had to taking risks to drive on our journey. The road was bad, but they arrived safely.

The family welcomed us warm. We were treated with good dinner. Later in the afternoon, after saying goodbye, we start back home.

    Sadly, our car was stuck in the snow halfway and wouldn't moved. Just then, two villager walked by and offered to push our car. Their helping us out of made our trip unforgettable.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

    I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for us school paper. I'm written this letter to apply for the position.

    I'm Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements: for one thing I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another I'm good at both English or Fine Arts. I'm either skilled in using computers. I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

    I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today was my father's birthday, so I decided to bake a cake for him. I didn't know how make a cake. I couldn't tell my father because of I wanted to give him a surprise. It was my firstly attempt, so I searched on the Internet and found much videos there. I choose the best one. I saw the full videos and started baking. First I collected all the things which might be needed to bake a cake. And then, I followed the steps and finally my cake was ready. Last, I decorated the cake by chocolates so that it looked more delicious. Then I gave the cake to his father and he was really surprising.