When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycle. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money.

    And he said he could only give me half of the money. I should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was please when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处

    Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life. At about 9：00 a.m.，I go to the bookstore with my friends，there was a lot of new books，I didn't know which one to buy，because these books were all use to me. At last，I chose two. At 10：00，we went to the cinema，the film calling Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the film，and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even burst out tears. From the story，I understand that love is noble and valuable. That's a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again.

    What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My parents and I stayed at the Shangri-La Hotel for a week when we visit Suzhou last month. It is in the downtown area, and it is easy go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

    We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Suzhou. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

    It is so a great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of mine, that is going to Suzhou.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    My parents have decided to take me to pay visit to Britain. I am excited，hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly，I will talk to native speaker as much as I can to improve on my English. Secondly，there are many attractions that interests me a lot，among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England，is my favorite sport. They have been dreaming of watching a live football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lived in London. I will probable meet her. Whatever I do，I am sure I will have a good time.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than be praised by my teacher before my classmates.

    Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knock down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find whether the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Li Ming went to stop a taxi quickly. Immediate, I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with them. Soon, Li Ming came back with the taxi. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drive her to the nearest hospital.

The old lady was saved up and we also felt pleased. We also reminded her to exercise extreme cautious when crossing the road. What's more, I remembered the car's number but the traffic police caught the driver quickly.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My dream school starts at 8: 30 a. m. and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

    My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.