假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

   Echo,my favorite teacher, is a pretty and slim lady. When she talks to us, she always has a smile on his face. I think Echo is gifted teacher because she hasa lot of good teach methods. Her classes are so full of funs that you will never feel bored. To improve our grades, she usually gave us some advice on how to learn English well . What's more, she spends much her time helping her students instead of staying with her family. Sometimes, she hardly has any timeto have the lunch. Whenever I ask her questions, she will spare no effort to make me understood, with patience or care. I have never seen so a good teacheras her before.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I often quarrel with my mother over if I can watch TV after school. She holds the view that high school students has to make full use of every minute to work hard at their lesson. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that, I'll be unable to control myself and forgot all about my study. I also thinks watching TV is bad for my eyes. But I really can't accept her ideas. In my opinion, watching TV can make my mind to have a rest after a day's hardly work. Beside, it is important for us to know what has happened home and abroad. Thus, we shouldn't be forbidding to watch TV.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在改词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

例如：

    I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

    Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

    No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others in need, the world would be a better place to live.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr White,

    I am writing tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school hold a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won a first place. In my view, it is your kind help which has helped me gain the achievement. During your spare time, you often spent such much time helping me with your spoken English that I made rapid progress. In the competition, I followed your advices on how to behave, which led to my success. I'm grateful to you for your help and decide that I will make up more efforts and try to make great progress in the future.

    I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Lily is one of the pupils which are studying in Yangquan Primary School. One day, in her way to school, Lily found the wallet lying on the road. She picked it up and found a lot of money and a calling card in them. She thought the loser must be worried. Without the wallet, she went to a public telephone and called up on the owner. Then she waits at the bus-stop. The owner, an old lady came by taxi in a moment. Lily gave the wallet to her. The owner was very thankful that she took out a 100-yuan notes to reward Lily. But she refused it and went to school. Seeing this, the owner raised her thumb and praised Lily helping her in time again and again.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jo worked at a bush school whose classrooms were made bamboo. There was no electricity or water there. It took the students about two hour to get to the school. Jo hoped to make a different to the children's lives by teaching them. The other day, Jo and Jenny visited Tombe's home. When we arrived at the village, Tombe's mother who had been working in her garden, starting crying "ieee ieee". Tombe's father led them to his house, a low bamboo hut with grass stick out of the roof, where he could only see a few tin plates and cups and a couple of pots. Which they ate were sweet potatoes, corn and greens. That night Jo and Jenny slept on an newly made platform. They left for the village the next morning after many goodbyes and firmly handshakes.