假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I'd have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn't have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn't any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I thought my life will become very differently in ten years. I will be twenty-eight year old by then and I will have my own family, probable with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company a program designer. I'll enjoy my work or get along well with my workmates. I'll do the good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I'll continue taken regular exercise, such as swimming, running and different ball games. During my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, our life will be much more richer and more colorful.

    What exactly are social media? Social media are defined as web-based, mobile media that can {#blank#}1{#/blank#}(use) to connect with each other.

    There are several types of social media. The first type involves people getting together to work on a project. Wikipedia（维基百科）is {#blank#}2{#/blank#} example of this type of social media. There are other types that allow people {#blank#}3{#/blank#} (share) content such as pictures and articles. Another type of social media is websites like Second Life, {#blank#}4{#/blank#} people can create objects, as if they {#blank#}5{#/blank#} (be) in the real world. The final type is social networking sites that can make people stay in touch with {#blank#}6{#/blank#} (friend).

    Social media are different from {#blank#}7{#/blank#}(tradition) media. In the past, media were created in one place, {#blank#}8{#/blank#} (normal) a company. Then the company would send out the media, like newspapers and magazines, to consumers. But {#blank#}9{#/blank#} social media, many individuals in different locations can create content. In addition, a few minutes are spent {#blank#}10{#/blank#} (write) a twitter post today, while it would take many months to edit a magazine in the past.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Every weekend, I took my children to the park. I think it's a good way of them to meet other child and make friends. They love play on the swings, so they are always very exciting when we go to the park. They also like playing hide-and-seek with my little friends. I often make some cakes so that the children can eat when they is hungry. We often have a rest on the grass and have the lunch together. There is a small pond with a lot ducks in the park. All the children have greatly fun feeding them pieces of bread.

文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

    The teacher I loved her most was my English teacher at senior high. She was one of those strict teacher，but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us. Thus we guys all showed respect to her. She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to write. She always writes helpful suggestions for writing, organizing and presented better work. She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure, that gave us confidence. She always made us to feel happy in his class. She made big difference to our lives.