增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Miss Wang,

    Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some advices.

    Popular science books is what we need most. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They helped us understand science better and arouse our curiosity scientific discoveries.

    In addition to read for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend other category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinated stories and language. They not only offer us a joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critical.

    I'll be glad whether you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

  Leo

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
          2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(／＼), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Miss Brown,

    We have received your application last week. We regret to in forming you that our company has hired other girl for the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, we decided that we should need someone with more office experience for this particular position. You have impressed on your desire to learn and your ability work hard. But we do hope that you will apply for the position in our company sometime in a future. We would like to thank you for your interesting in our company. Please contact them if there are any further questions.

Yours,

John Smith

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉（\）。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As is well-known that birds are our friends. However, the large number of birds are killed for food every year, that really causes more and more people to be worried. The other day I was walking in the woods while a shot was heard. Heard the shot, the birds in the trees flew in all directions. A bird was badly injured and looked sadly. Finding the bird injured, so I decided to take them home. At home I take good care of it. When it recovered, I returned it to the woods. I hope something should done to protect birds from being killed.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。