增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Dear Janice,

    It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some problems. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many money. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?

    Please help with me and give me some advice.

    Yours,

    Grace

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Ten years ago, I was lucky enough to have an opportunity to study in England as a international student. I went to one of the most famous school there. On the first day, I was such nervous that I felt my heart beaten wildly. I was afraid to express to myself, because I have never communicated with strangers in English before. Therefore, my teacher said I had to introduce me in front of the class. As soon as the first word flew out my mouth, I felt relaxing immediately. I was happy I finally made it. It's a special day, which I will never forget.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    For students learned instruments, summer is always a "music season". During vacation time, we are always busy attending various of lessons, taking exams and participate in contests. This summer I joined in a music contest but was lucky to getting the second place. It was the first time that I have played on the stage. In front of the stage were my exciting schoolmates. Facing so many people, I felt very upset at first, but that my teacher said kept me going ahead. Fortunately, I was given a silver medal, it increased my confidence. In short, nothing is impossible to willing heart.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last weekend a sports meeting hold in our school was unforgettable. Our class attended the opening parade, for what our class had made a lot of preparations. Our parade took in the shape of the letter "V", which indicated victory for us. To our excitement, our parade performance was great success. After the parade, the games started. My classmates attended various event such as running, high jump and long jump. Due to the hard training we had done before, their performances were particular impressive. On the stand, we applauded and cheer for the athletes, some raising their cameras to capture the excited moments. Finally, the result was announced. It was amazing that our class was won first place. Our efforts paid off!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Recently, one of my friends have sent me a short message, say that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is.

    Nowadays, the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage. In my opinion, true friendship doesn't mean that you need your friends help, you'll treat them to dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and understand of the souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure him. With friendship, life proves happily and harmonious.