增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错误的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    When I was a kid, my sisters and I started a club for fan of a band. Our club met regular to trade facts about the band's and to listen to their music. We were all different ages, and we might not have many common besides our love for this music, or the club was important to us for a while. We had good time and became good friends.

    Since then, I had joined all kind of clubs. Clubs give us a chance to focus on special interests, improve a skill, or learn about new one. Clubs are also about make new friends. I've learned that the best clubs are the ones that welcome someone who wants to join.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, I received one of the students from the US, which name was Mike. The first day, I went to pick him up at the Capital Airport and we chatted happy along the way. On the second day, we paid a visit to the famous Maoer Hutong, where we had an interesting rickshaw(黄包车)tour. Mike became very exciting about the driver's detailed introduce to the history of Hutong. The following day, I took him to Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre to watch Beijing Opera. Although he could understand few words, but he was still amazed to seeing the colorful costumes and the unique way of performing. When it was time of him to return to the US, I send him some gifts with Chinese elements, such as a Beijing Opera mask and a Chinese knot. He was very grateful for I had done and said him was really impressed by the rich Chinese culture.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As is reported that 7 billionth baby was born in October 31^st, 2011. However, people don't seem to be happier about the news. The earth had become too crowed. People are suffering from various problems such as lack for resources, poverty, starvation and so on. Great damage has been causing to earth as human beings struggle for more living space.

    I am worried the future of our planet. I hope all the country cooperate and take measures to prevent the population from growing too fast. Besides, people should use natural resources more effective. After all, we have the only one earth.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    When I started the 4th grade, there were a program in my school where students could learn instruments but play in the band. I really wanted play the guitar so I signed up as soon as possible. After the week，a piece of paper was send to my mail box saying I had been admitted. I was extreme happy! I rented my first guitar, which I practiced it for a few hours a day. As time went on, I started to become well known as my music. Therefore, if you had a hobby you like, turn that hobbies into a gift, and show the world what you do!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait. A man lived nearby saw what had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of a bus. Then he took us to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in his home and help came final. All of them are thankful to him for what he did.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Hello, Jack! I need your help. I am going to organizing a money-raising project for poor students. However, I am at a loss about what to start. I don't know what type of people was most likely to donate. Is it a good idea to visit to local business people? Besides, what is best way to let the public know your ideas? Last but not least, how can I guarantee that the raising money will be sent to the students who really needs it? Considering that you have much experience in organizing similarly projects, I am wondering whether you could give me some suggestion.