假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Sunday, Miss Green told Lisa, Jack and Lily a story about a girl names Cathy, who is just 12 years old. One day, when she was at the home, her mother careless cut her finger, which immediately started bleeding. As a little girl, Cathy didn't get a panic. Instead, she calmly cleaned her mother wound and then stopped it from bleed. She did that so she had just learned how to give first aid. Then Miss Green encouraged both of them to learn more about first aid. “It's really important because it can not only helps deal with injuries but also save life,” she said. After hearing it, they decide to learn first aid skills.