增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（    ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.  {#blank#}1{#/blank#}  {#blank#}2{#/blank#}

My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help.  {#blank#}3{#/blank#}  {#blank#}4{#/blank#}

Mum taught me  some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. {#blank#}5{#/blank#}

I  thought the biscuits were really well. {#blank#}6{#/blank#}

My only mistake was that I dropped  some on the floor after I was packing them up.    {#blank#}7{#/blank#}
 At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly  who made them and joked,  {#blank#}8{#/blank#}

“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”  {#blank#}9{#/blank#}
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! {#blank#}10{#/blank#}

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.

    What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am writing this letter to thank you for guidance you gave me. I was a perfectly stranger when reaching this city. Once lost myself in a downtown street, I stopped to ask some people for help. As you know, this is the first time for us to come up to this big city.

    I bought a guidebook, and I still had difficulties in going around the city. The streets and shops puzzled me too much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance which has enabled me go about the city without any trouble. Now I begin to know how to take proper buses. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping.

    Lessons will begin after a few days. I will come over to sec you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

                                                                                          How to keep mental health

    As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it's vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.

    Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It's their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.

    In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Li Ping and Liu Ying were classmates and they got alone well with each other. Li Ping did very well in the mid-term examination and felt pride of himself, while Liu Ying fail to pass it. However, Liu Ying made up her mind to catch up. She worked hardly at her lessons than ever before. After school Liu Ying would stay behind to ask his teacher some questions. In the evening she should do her homework carefully and went over her lessons. In a result she made great progress. But Li Ping was quite different. Much more of his spare time spent playing basketball or online games. In the final exam, Liu Ying did more better while Li Ping didn't. Now, it was Li Ping which felt sad this time.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim,

    I'm very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn't know what to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you some suggestion.

    First of all, it is quite common of high school students to feel depressed sometimes. What really matters is you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to your teachers for help. He will surely provide you with a useful and practical advice. Besides, take an active part in sports or you'll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also a good way to relax yourself.

    I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua