增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ralph,

    I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, “We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation.” So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；  2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

    How are everything going? I am writing to tell you that I have made a lot of progresses. But I would prefer to moving into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient(不便的) to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, making much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attention to this problem. I am surely you will agree that the only solution for I is to get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would appreciate very much if you could do me the favor.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改5处，多者(从第6处起〕不计分

    One day, I got up late. While I was busy gather my books, Father came in with a glass of milk in his hand for me to drink. I was in such a hurry that I paid no attention to whether the milk was hot or not. I drank a mouthful of them and cried. The milk was so hot that my tongue hurt. Father turned around and went back to the kitchen in a hurry without an apology. I was very angry with Father. When I went to a kitchen to get my breakfast, I was astonished at which I saw. Father was cooling the milk by pouring it from one glass to another again and again, with tears in my eyes, I feel very sorry.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One of my happier days was hearing that I was admitted into a medical school. It has been a dream of me for as long as I can remember. My father played big role in my desire to become a physician. See him live a life of services to others inspired me from a young age. Watching him to put on his white coat with the stethoscope（听诊器）around his neck was liked looking at a superhero. Hearing him share stories of how medical care saved patients' lives was enjoyable. As for me, medicine were the perfect mixture of wonder and science, that deeply attracted me.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Oliver,

    How are you? I'm writing to share an exciting news about my new family business.

    As you known, my town don't have a sporting goods store. The close place to buy sports equipment is about 20 kilometer from here. My brother Mark and I will open a sporting goods store. It will have better customer service than the others stores, and our prices will be lower. Mark will be the store manager so he is good with people. I will be the advertising manager. We plan to open the store in May.

    I hope you can come or visit our store soon! I look forward to hear from you soon.

Take care,

Lucy

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    After school, I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lying beside the dustbin. He looked extreme weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me with sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food or a bath. After the bath he looked energetic and refreshing. What a lovely dog!

    While my parents got home, I asked if I could keep the dog. To my surprised, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.