增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my parent. What I want to give back is a VIP card of a health club but neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works very hardly as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often bury herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.

    I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks for them. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends here. At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The other day, when I walk into the classroom, the teacher was giving out test papers. I was feeling very nervously. I didn't study at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the paper many time but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail in the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opened them and started looking for the answers. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I feel a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheat. I didn't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish me for cheating but also gave me a second chance.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Two years ago my husband buy me a bicycle. If you live in a town, it is often fast than a car and you don't have to worry parking. You can leave them in any place you like. As it has a seat at the back or a basket at the front, it's convenient for me to take my little daughter to school, and go shopping. I use it most in summer while the weather is warm and dry. It can be unpleasant in winter, though, when the weather is cold and rain. It can also be dangerous. You should be careful of on a bicycle. Accidents are not the only problem. One day I went shop and came back to find my front wheel gone. Now I have three strong lock.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

    In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and pay a visit to my uncle there. It was a long and tired journey. But the moment when I arrived, I fell in love with the city. It's so beautiful a city as I can hardly find any word to describe them. The streets are clean. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind blowing in your face. The sea is blue and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship floating by. You may also do some fishing as long as it permitted. Moreover, I think  the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be carefully enough when crossing the streets.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    During my last summer holiday, I go to the countryside to enjoy myself. I saw mother bird stay in her nest in a big tree, watching some of her baby flying away. I thought she must be very proud of her children, that were able to find her own food now. But she might also feel a sense of loss since they wouldn't need of her day-to-day care any long. For my parents, things are much easier. We have set up our family blog to posting our photos and journals. Once I leave for college, we can convenient share our experiences but support each other. Their "nest" will never be empty.