增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(错误！不能通过编辑域代码创建对象。)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last summer I take a part­time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it. How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, write to me soon.

Yours，

Mary

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Thank you so much for inviting me to take part in the winter camp organizing by your school in the coming winter holiday. Quite interested, I am writing to learn about farther details.

    Above all, I wonder that it is convenient for you to inform me for the specific schedule in advance. Beside, this will be my first experience to participate in such a activity. Would you be kind enough to offer with any suggestions on whose items I specially need to take with me?

    I am really excited and looking forward to it. I would appreciate if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenient.

    It was raining hardly. In his way home from school Peter saw an old man walking with difficult in the rain without an umbrella. Peter went up to him and offered share the umbrella with him. The old man is in poor health, so Peter tried to hold the umbrella. But he was so short to hold it high enough. While wondering how to do, he saw the old man's stick and had an idea. He had tied the stick to the handle of the umbrella and made them longer. Now we shared the umbrella. Peter was happy.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The writing class had just began. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be announce to read his or her paragraphs aloud. Some of us are confident to take part this class activity, while others were nervous. Though I had done my homework well, but I was afraid to speak before a large group of people. My father once said, "The classroom is a place where includes learning from my courage." Remembering which my father had said, I raised my hand immediate.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：①每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I still remember a embarrassing experience last month. That day, I was overslept. I was running around my apartment quickly because there was something scarier for me than be late for work. I called a taxi, put on a dress, put all the necessary things into my bags, and closed it without even looking into it. Then I took my wallet, and run out. It didn't take much time to get to work because I was hurrying the driver at every traffic light. At last, I was in the office. Surprising, when I opened my bag, I saw the 2 yellow or scared eyes of my cat looking me. She seemed to be just as shocking as I was.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处.多者（从第11处起）不计分.

In Senior Two, a difficulty I met with was that I would feel extremely nervous whenever take a test. That would cause me fail to work out some problems as could be done by me after the test. I went to my teachers and classmates at help. They told me to calm down and believe in me. Thanks to their constant encouragement, I later made a great progress in my test, and gained many confidence,

Surely, we may meet with some difficulties in our study? but we needn't be afraid of them. To deal with these difficulties, we are supposing to find out the reasons first. Beside, consulting our teachers and classmates can contribute a lot to solving problems. Just had trust in yourself!