增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1)、每处错误极其修改均仅限一词；

      2)、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm a student from Chongqing, China. I am write to keep you informing of something about the severe situation that finless porpoises, a kind of rare and lovely animal, are facing with presently.

It's because of human activities that finless porpoises are endangered. It's terrible that there are merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises live in China. However, it's high time that immediate measures must be taken. Don't you think so? If possible, how I hope you can help us by funding your project aiming at protecting finless porpoises! Under your financial aid, I am convinced fewer finless porpoises will survive. I would appreciate greatly if you could consider my application.

Looking forward to your early reply.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

    My soccer coach retired in last week．I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party．My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help．Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well．My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up．

    At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

    My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分；

2）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。  

    There were many people on the bus and no vacant seats. When a woman got off, a man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “Thank you,” she said, “but please don't do that. I am perfect able to stand.” “But, madam, let me…” began the man. “I ask you to keep your seat,” interrupted a woman with the hands on her shoulders. So the man tried to rise, and said: “Madam, will you kindly permit me to…?” “No, no,” said the woman and again force him back. At last the man managed to get up, say: “Madam, you have carried me three block beyond my house. I want get off.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I don't remember exact how old I was when I began to ride a bike. I only remembered how I practiced riding a bike in early years. When I first successfully rode a bike, that remains a vivid memory, my brother helped me with holding the back seat of the bike when I was riding. “Wow, I did it!” cried I, as soon as he noticed I was riding without his hands hold it! I learnt quickly, and soon, even though my feet were not touching the ground, but I was able to cycle around six kilometer a day to school! It's so lovely to remember which happened at that time.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My name is Li Hai. I come from an island to the south of China called Hainan Island. There is a good number of animals living on or around the island. We have monkey, deer, birds or varieties of fish. Hainan Island is a place to know about fish. My father is a fisherman with which I have been on many fishing trips. He makes a living by fish on the sea. He was taught my brother and me many about different kinds of fish, several of which only live in the sea around Hainan Island. My hometown is real a beautiful place. It attracts many tourists in world.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays, this is common to hear about a young person getting this or that kind of serious disease. A couple of day ago, a friend in her 20s asked me that whether I was familiar with some health products. She tells me that she got tired easily and seemed to be in state of sub-health. At the age of twenty, one should feel filled with strong and energy. And some people at that age have started to worry about their health. Since we now have more access to information about keeping healthy, we should start to act responsible and pay special attention to improve our health.