增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Today is Tom's 70^th birthday, but there is anybody with him. He feels very disappointing. His sons didn't care for him on this special day. Although the cakes are very delicious, but he doesn't want to touch it. He just wants his children come and see him. Nowadays, many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents. But blood is thick than water. Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty. Thus, we should and must bring happy to them when they become old.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Lucy,

    I'm glad to hear that you are interesting in my city. As you read online, great changes have been taken place in our country. It is more convenient to live in the city than before. Private cars were everywhere now. Lots of people shop on Internet, that is especially popular among young people. What's more, people are paying more attention on their health. You can find more people in the park or in their neighborhood, doing exercises. Even young people are paying lots of attention to their diet. All in all, our city looks very differently. I hope that they will be able to visit my city this summer holiday. I'm looking forward to show you around our city. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Everyone in our village likes my father, so he has a sense of humor. In the other words, he can make people laugh easy and they feel happy to be around him. Admired his good personality is the main reason for me to dream that one day I can be as humor as him. I even asked him how have a good sense of humor, but what he replied disappointed me. “Not everyone can make other laugh, because those that are of humor are usually born to be so,” he said. However, later, he adds, “But you can if you know a lot of joke.” That's why now I'm reading books about them.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Dr. Fang,

    I read your magazines every month. I myself is a teenager, almost 16, and have some problem at home and I hope you can help me. The mainly problem is that I can't get along my father. Whenever I want to do something or suggest an idea, he didn't listen to me. Then, when I refuse to listen to her, my father shouts at me angrily. He and my mother always make me to do things I don't like, such as playing the piano and do housework. How should I do?

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Which would you prefer to live, in the city or the countryside? While many people choose the former, I think for children, live in the countryside is a better choice. Country areas were less polluted. Children exposing to these environments are much healthier than those in cities. With fresh air breathe, children in the countryside are generally healthier and happier. We can acquire a lot of living skills, such as what to make a fire, cook and so on. They can also run freely in the fields, climb trees, catch the fish and do many other interesting things.

    Of course, we can't absolute deny that living in the city has its advantages. But in my view, the countryside is more appropriate of children to grow up.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A photo on my desk always takes me back to the moment that I gave a talent show for foreign friend. In the picture, I can be seen delicate performing Erhu. When I introduced myself at English, the audience applauded encourage me. I was no longer nervous. I devoted myself wholeheartedly to play. My performance was quite a success. Before the performance, an American was named Amy, who was of my age, sang the song God Is a Girl to me. We even make a deal that we would teach each other my mother tongues.