假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures. J．K. Rowling, wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam

    I've learned from the newspaper dial my company is looking for a clerk. I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply for at the position.

    First of all， allow me introduce myself. I have just graduated from senior high school and take the College Entrance Examination. I want to find an part - time job in the summer. I'm 18 years old and have a good knowledge of English, especially in terms at speaking and listening. In fact, I won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school last year. Besides, I'm quite easy - going and therefore very popular among my classmate.

    I sincere hope you can give me a chance. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for our school paper. I'm written this letter to apply to the position.

    I'm Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements. For one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others. For another, I'm good at both English or Fine Arts. I'm either skilled in using computers. I would be glad when you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

    I'm looking forward to your kind earliest reply at your convenient.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Our school has the new rule that all students are banned from eat out during school days. For first thing, the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed. For another, the food in the canteen is cheap than that outside. So if students had meals in the canteen, they may save money. However, some students are against the rule but eat out. They dislike the food in the canteen because of their own taste. Personally, make more students have meals inside the campus, the school should take some measure to make the food taste nicer. Beside, the school should offer students with a larger variety of food.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    They are the sort of friend who are so close they trust each other with their lives. If one falls, the other is there catch him.

    One is Wellman, his legs were permanently injured nine years before in a rock-climbing accident. The other is Corbett. He is a experienced rock climber. Together with, they climbed up Half Dome，the famous 2,000-foot rock in the Yosemite National Park.

    However, their climb of Half Dome is not all smooth. At one point, pieces of rock gave way, but Corbett dropped down quickly. Wellman locked their rope in place, stopping the fall at 20 feet. Her quick action probably saved his friend life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The United Kingdom consists with England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland. England is the largest and for the convenience it is divided roughly into three zones. London is the center of national government, with its fine museums, art collections or the oldest port.

    Why did only Northern Ireland join England? In the early twentieth century the English government tried to form the United Kingdom by get Ireland connected without conflict.

    Therefore, the southern part of Ireland was unwilling and break away to form its own government. To its credit, the countries do work together in the currency, international relations and so on, but they still have very different institution.

    It's a pity in England the industrial cities do not attract visitors. People can go to older but smaller towns build by the Romans for historically architecture and to the countryside for great scenery as well.