假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

      The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

    One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.

    Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When I was young, my mother owned a store, in that she also sold magazines and books. I love to stay in the store, reading everything I found. It failed to help develop my ability to judge a good book, and it helped improve my reading skills. Then my mother began to focus on quality instead quantity. She bought books I wouldn't find them in her store. Later, as my interest at theater began, I spent most of time read Shakespeare and George Bernard Shaw, to name the few. Anyway, good storytelling opened the window to different worlds I otherwise would have never entered. In additions, when I lived through a difficultly period books became advisers.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear John,

    How time flies! I'm very glad to hear you again. You want to know which is going on in schools in China. In the word, everything has changed. Every school take part in the campaign of reducing learning load. In the past, I used to studying until 11: 30 on weekends. But now I can arrange things of my own, such as reading books, visiting museums, or take computer lessons on weekends. In the evening I can watch news on the TV, or read newspapers. What's more, my parents support me. They think because I am a student, I don't have to study all day long. I think the idea of reducing learning load was well accepted by everyone.

    Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(—)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

Sitting in his restaurant, WangPeng felt frustrated because his restaurant ought to being full of people, but it is empty.  He saw his friend pass by and followed by him to a new restaurant, which sign read, "Tired of all that fat? Want to lose weight?" He entered it because of curious and found Yong Hui, owner of the restaurant, was telling lies. To win his customers back, he changed her menu. One day, Yong Hui came to his restaurant and asked he had spied on her.

Wang Peng suggested that they combined their ideas and provide a balance menu. And such they did. They fell in love and finally got married.