增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'd like to share with you my progresses in study in these three years.To be,honest,I was not so good at my study when I came to high school,often feel tired out and at Loss.Sometimes,I am even on the point of giving up.Therefore, my change happened when my teachers and my classmates as well as came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. It was their encouragement and my own thinking which resulted in my achievements in study finally.

    Still not excellent although I am now,I have found myself filled with greatly confidence to face any difficulty and challenge.It is no doubt that I am bound to fight for my dream to the end-n the coming months!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It's such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all round. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have a lot of spare time to visit the area or have fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience. If you have an interest in it, write to me soon

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The other day, I got on my bike to take photographs of the nature. It was my school project what had to be finished today. I woke up much earlier than usual and left my house. It was still darker outside. When I arrived the lake, it was just at daybreak. The sky was pink but the sun was rising over the water. I sat on a rock next to the lake and watched the fish swimming in the water, listened to the birds singing in the nearby wood. Sudden, I realized I have forgotten my camera on the bike. I returned to get them. Now, I could take pictures.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；、

2). 只允许修改10处.多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When we play football on our school's football field, we have got be very careful. That's because of there is an ancient tree growing in a middle of it. Our school is surround by many historical building. When we decided to turn the only available space into a football field, we find the tree had to be removed. We asked for permission to have it removed anywhere else, and it was too risky because the tree is considered as a national treasure. Final, we decided to build the field around it. I consider the tree as a great symbol of our school.

注意：1)．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2)．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Dear Jin Jing,

    Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you .First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interests with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.

Yours,

Lily

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Some days before, I decided to leave my bike at home and take the bus instead. On the bus, I pull my cap off. When I reached my stop, I got off the bus. While cross the street, I realized something were missing. My cap! I turned around, running to the bus, and the bus pulled away from the stop. Just then, a bus stopped a short distance away because a red light. While I sadly looked at the bus, the door was opened. A man stood near the door and looked around. Seen me, he waved something: It was my cap. I barely had time to grab them and say thank you before the door closed again.