增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming increasingly popularly in senior high school. We also have many kind of after-class activities in our school, such as English Corner, Sunshine Radio Station. Happy Reading Club and so on. I'm most interested in English Corner, that can not only helps(helps应该为help) me make some new friends but also improving my spoken English. However, I'm a member of Sunshine Radio Station. In Monday morning, every student are able to enjoy my sweet voice all over our school. Here I can have unforgettable experience and I hope my dream of be a host may come true one day. These after-class activities make me become more confident and enrich my school life as well as.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。

    Last year, a girl got herself stick in the sewer (下水道) and almost lost his life. Thanks the police, she was rescued in time. This accident were caused by the girl's carelessness while walking. She fixed so much attention on her mobile phone that she didn't notice the sewer in the front of her was without a cover.

    It sounds kind of ridiculous, but it's truly and common in our daily life. Mobile life has distracted (分散) people's attentions from face-to-face communication. It seems what they can't live without a mobile phone. Whether waiting for the bus or meet with friends, they will make sure that their mobile phone is at hand.

Don't let mobile phones control your life, and you may lose yourself someday.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

    I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ralph,

    I'm a newcomer here who comes of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I felt unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talk to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger right away. I am trying to improve the situation and it doesn't seem to work. Can you tell me something which I should do it?

Yours

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently I have taken an interest in cook so I suggest that the school organizes a cooking﹣learning activity to teach students to prepare any delicious food. It can be a great fun and I bet there will be a lot communication going on among students. Besides, it's a good way to build up team spirit. The school can even held a competition to see whom can cook the most delicious food. More important, I think cooking is a vital skill for people nowadays. What is known to all, eating self﹣cooked food is a much healthier and little costly way of life than eating in a restaurant.