增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, it was so hot that my parents and I went to Changli Park to enjoy the shade. On the way, I found I have forgotten to bring my cell phone with me, but I returned for it. Reach my home, I noticed one of the window wide open. “My parents aren't at home. Who can it be?” I wondered. I walked to window, looked through it and in my surprise, found two strangers were trying to open a case. I was so frightened at the sight which I couldn't say a word. I left there silent without being noticed. Then I phoned the police for help. Five minutes late, three policemen appeared and caught up the two thieves.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn't found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills，so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English，he shook his head，says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV，playing cards，smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago，he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed，he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Henry,

    I'm more than delighted to hear of you. As for the ancient Chinese poems what impress me most, I'd like to share one with you.

    The poem is The Awaiting Stone by Wang Jian, one of the most famous poet in the Tang Dynasty. The poem sings high praise for a wife's love for her husband. Every time I read the poem, a sad-looking woman stands in the rain and wind seems to appear in the front of me, waiting for her husband to return. The poem rhyme and is very short, which makes it easy understand. That's because it has been popular ever since.

    I hope you will like them and the Chinese culture as well.

Yours,

Li Hua