注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms Lee,

    I'm delighting to have you as my English teacher. English has become a global language, so I'm convinced that learning English is of great useful. We should learn English well to better understand that happens around the world．

    But my English is rather poor. One of my problems are that I often feel nervously when speaking in public. Besides, I feel difficult to learn words by heart. I really hope you can offer me more chances to speak with English. But I also hope you'll give me some advices on how to learn new words. I believe I can make many progress than ever with your help.

    Thank you!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My name is Lihua, who is Senior 3 student from Xing Guang Middle School. Every day I have to get up on 6:10 am, when much people are still sleeping. I'm busy with my studies because I have a lot of homework to do, which make me feel under great pressure. English is the subject in that I'm interested. When I feel stressing, I'll turn to my best friend Mike for help. We have been best friend since we are very young. Whenever I'm in trouble, he will cheer him up. Now I'm trying my hard to prepare for the college entrance examination. I hope to be admitted into Zhejiang University.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mr. Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony, who enjoyed listen to music very much. So he bought a piano to Tony, hoping that he could become a famous pianist one day. The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seems to enjoy every minute of it. Therefore, half a year later, he told his father that he was tired practising the piano. Hear this, Mr. Smith said, “Tony, it is one thing to be fond of listening to music, but it is another thing to perform good by yourself. You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor's orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A photo on my desk always takes me back to the moment that I gave a talent show for foreign friend. In the picture, I can be seen delicate performing Erhu. When I introduced myself at English, the audience applauded encourage me. I was no longer nervous. I devoted myself wholeheartedly to play. My performance was quite a success. Before the performance, an American was named Amy, who was of my age, sang the song God Is a Girl to me. We even make a deal that we would teach each other my mother tongues.