增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I have always been the big fan of music, but to be honest I don't know any person whom has ever openly disliked it. It's one of true friend in life because it can be enjoyed by anyone and everyone. With books, you have to be able to read, and music has no limits, no special conditions and was easily enjoyed by all. I don't think there are many things in life for which have such a directly and clear influence on one's feeling. Obvious, however, there are some people who are much influenced by music, and of course it depends what sort of music they're into. Watch people react to one of their favorite songs is actually the best thing ever.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\画掉。

修改：在错词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays, more and more people have their own mobile phones, some of who are always lowering their heads to play the mobile phones instead of communicating with their families. That is so annoying. In fact, the further distance in the world is not between life and death, however when I stand in front of you, you are playing with your mobile phones. I complete understand it because my sister is one of the phubbers（低头族）.

    Last weekend, I went to KFC with my sister. I wanted to order some foods, so I asked her what she would like to eat. She didn't make any response to me but kept talk with her friends on Wechat. I felt angry, and I shouted her: “It is impolite to play your mobile phone at table.”

    In my opinion, it is high time that we throw away the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish everything around me and appreciate the scenery in the front of us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday, I, with a friend of mine, were having a picnic in a park when it began to rain heavily. We packed everything up rapid and were ready to leave. My friend, her hair was already wet, suddenly couldn't move and speak. Her eye were rolling and she was about to lose consciousness. I was so frightening that I didn't know how to do. Luckily, a woman on a bicycle appeared. Struggle with the rain, she managed to call an ambulance. My friend has recovered the next morning. I am so grateful for the woman. But I haven't even got chance to thank her.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, it was so hot that my parents and I went to Changli Park to enjoy the shade. On the way, I found I have forgotten to bring my cell phone with me, but I returned for it. Reach my home, I noticed one of the window wide open. “My parents aren't at home. Who can it be?” I wondered. I walked to window, looked through it and in my surprise, found two strangers were trying to open a case. I was so frightened at the sight which I couldn't say a word. I left there silent without being noticed. Then I phoned the police for help. Five minutes late, three policemen appeared and caught up the two thieves.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Sunday I witnessed traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while I heard a loud noise. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meter away. I went up and found the two drivers badly injured, bleeding or trapped in the taxis. Lucky, they were rescued in time because of people came to help them and called an ambulance. It was clear that the taxi drivers were such eager to take more passengers that they drive too fast. These drivers lacked responsibility for the safe of their passengers. What they did was dangerous for others as well as them.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I'm glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I'm writing to express my sincerely thanks to you.

    Having been received the offer, I knew all my efforts finally paid off. College life distinguished a lot from senior school life. Undoubtedly, it's another life combined with challenge and sweet memories. I can't wait to going to college.

    A million thanks to your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. There was a period where I was totally at the loss, doubting whether I could make any progress in my study. It's you helped cheer me up. Never will I forget what you said－doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. But to your help, I could never have enjoyed such joyful a harvest. I really appreciate your helpful instruct. And I'll appreciate it if you could come to my celebration party on August the 8th.