Dear Bob,

    I'm so glad to learn that you are come in September. I found a place for you. It's a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. The rent is 500 yuans per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, it is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straightly to the school. In fact, it's only one stop way. Do you think you'd like it? If so , I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.

Yours ,

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Many students in my school feel annoying that they are under great pressure. It has become a common problem in most high school in China. As it is known to all, China has large population. Almost 10 million students graduate from high school every year, expected to be admitted by universities or college. Instead, the competition among the students is fierce. We had to stand out and prove to be better than others, who means we have to work really hard. Of course, some students can't bear the pressure but drop behind while others face the challenge bravely.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

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注意：

①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom，

I'm glad to hear that you are coming for a holiday in our city the next month. I'm such happy that you will stay in my house.

There have been greatly changes in the last three year in my home. First, we have rebuilt your house, which now has four private rooms. You can choose any of them to live when you come. Second, my parents have set up a small restaurant in our village, that you can eat healthily. I'm really willing to be your guide to make your journey interested and meaningful.

    If you had any requests, don't hesitate to let me know. Looking forward to hear from you. 

      Yours，

Li Hua

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修改：在错的词下画划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I needed to start work on 11 o'clock that morning. As a usual, I went back to my office at about 10:30. The mall was almost empty at this time. While walked down the aisle, I suddenly heard the sound of a car engine. It was strangely because no vehicles were allowed enter the mall. The car stopped just outside a jewellery shop and out jump a few masked men, all armed with weapons. I did not hesitate and called the police using my mobile phone. Before that, I just stood aside while watching the robbers finish his job. The police came just in time outside the mall. There was a crash when the robber escaped.

    Unfortunately, they were all arrested by the police.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of the financial crisis, the situation of the employment have become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western areas of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not very fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west may be bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is good for both our personal development and our country at present.