假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

    I would like to interview Yang Liwei because he is not only the first Chinese to going to space but also one of the greatest astronaut in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration but I believe I can learn a great deal with him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him what makes him an astronaut and how he trained. I would also like to know how he felt in the space and whether space travel is such great fun that I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about her personal life, that must be very interesting.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Thursday we go to Mianshan Mountain for our autumn outing.We got the foot of the mountain at 9 am. Following the long path, they began to climb.After some time,we were all tiring.We had a very shortly rest and moved on.At last,we succeeded in getting to the top,on which we kept laughing and jump.It was seemed that we were the happiest people in the world.We took some photo there,and then sat down but had something to eat.At 3 pm, we began to go down.It was a interesting and unforgettable day and all of us wished the autumn of our country would be with us forever.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Smith,

    I'm writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Cultural Fair be held by our school at the Art Center this Friday afternoon, at 2p.m .to 5p.m.

    Since a event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it is welcome. At the fair, relating books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through that visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but definitely feel about the unique beauty of it.

    If you were interested, please come and enjoy them. And I'd be glad to offer any helps. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When we are happy, we would like share our happiness with others, making them know our enjoyment. When we are not in a good mood, we wanted to get someone whom can listen to us. Be a listener is not easy. People always complain about our worries, and a good listener should listen to them but learn to comfort them. To be a good listener can help us make good friend with others. The one who always listen to others tends to be easy-going. When he is in the trouble, his friends will be willing to help him. So let's learn to be a good listener from then on.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last month, China celebrated its 70^th anniversary of its founding. It is known to we all that October 1^st is a National Day of the PRC. In this day, there are usually plenty of celebrations holding all over the country. In recent years, the national holiday also refers to the golden week, what is a mini-holiday that all people look forward to it. With the improvement of people's living standard, they have more money or desire to travel. Beside, it is a good chance have a good rest. Therefore, the National Day mean a lot to the Chinese.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My classmates and I went to the Beijing Exhibition Hall to see the exhibition on China's achievements in last Saturday.

    The exhibition attracted thousand of people all over the country, so we had to wait for a long time to get in. Luckily, we met a docent(讲解员) who gave us a introduction of the development during these years. We listened attentive and were deeply impressed by the brilliant success of our County. When we step into the Hi-tech display section, our eyes were caught by the high-speed train model "Fuxing". We were so amazing at it that we couldn't help take pictures all the time. After leaving, with the words "Chinese Dream" as a setting, we had a group photo to record the great moment.

    The visit to the exhibition gives me greater faith in Chinese dream, that our personal dreams are closely related to.