It was a very special day because Dylan Terry came to the West End Children's Home! Dylan Terry is my favorite (sing). I like him because he sings  (wonderful). He's cute and he helps the kids a lot. We (stand) near the door, waiting for him. Everyone was very excited. Finally, he arrived shook hands with us. He was so nice! He sang several songs for us. Some of us even started dancing he was singing. We were having a great time!

    our surprise, Dylan joined us for lunch. He brought us (an) big cake. Everyone ate some and (it) was delicious. While we were eating, Dylan told us many interesting (story) about himself. I never thought I could talk to my favorite pop star. It was just like a dream. I (remember) this unforgettable experience forever.