①What you don't like him is none of my business.

②Tom, as well as his two sisters like music.

③You have no excuse for not go.

④His father died, leave the family worse off.

⑤Your teacher was really worried about you. You couldn't have left school without telling him.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student held at the end of September. Unluckily, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total test score fell greatly and ranked 400^th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my hobby—fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother's suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It is clearly shown that many middle school students have physical and mentally problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won't obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance physical exercise and studies. Without good health, one can't achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework, but more time will be left for afterschool activities. Only in this way can we live energetic and healthy life.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hi, Tony,

    Good to hear from you! I'm glad that you're learning Chinese hard, because you feel it is difficult to learn it. Don't worry. I think a best way to learn Chinese is to ask your Chinese teacher with help. I hope you make great progress soon.

    Yes, you really have the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar (农历). It's one of the most important festival in China. All the family members got together for a big dinner that day. We usual eat moon cakes while enjoyed the moon at night. We believe the full moon are the symbol of reunion.

Bye for now,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

⒈ 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day I was waiting for the bus as usually. When it comes, I just followed the other people and got on. I was listening to my music, but I didn't notice that the bus was going in the wrong of direction. Then I looked out of the window and everything seemed strangely to me. All of sudden, I realized I was on the wrong bus. We were in the middle of the countryside, so he couldn't get off（下车）. The bus finally arrived back in the city center. Then I had to wait for the right bus. Unfortunate, it took me three hour to getting home instead of twenty minutes.