增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改9处，多者(从第10处起)不计分。

Dear Bob,

    I am very exciting to receive an e-mail from you and I am glad to know  you have a wonderful time during the past summer holiday. I took a trip to the countryside with some of my friend in last summer. Country life, in your opinion, gave me relaxation, which  I can't enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim together with friends in the cool, clean river in so hot days. In fact, I had never had a better holiday before and I took plenty of photos there. I keep the photos where I can see them every day, as they are worth keep forever.

Yours,

Tom

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Life is a mystery and we will never know that is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it's the process of solving problems that help us grow.

    Making a speech in public used to make me frightening. With a strong accent and terrible pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn't lose my heart. I was admitted by the school speech club. I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. With a help of others, I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I am confident enough to give my best speech to you all.

    Don't afraid of problems, but make use of it to be the best of ourselves!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm glad to hear of you. As for living at home and living in your school dormitory, I think you'd better to choose the latter. First of all, living in a dormitory will develop your ability of living independently and solve problems by yourself. Secondly, if you live there, you will find easier to share feelings with your friends; in all, you are of the same age and have common feelings towards many thing. Most important, living with your friends will improve your team spirit, that will be beneficial to your future career.

    I hope you can consider my advice seriously and then make you final decision.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在这个词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词;

2）每句只允许修改1处，多者（从第2处起）不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉每句只允许修改1处，多者(从第2处起)不计分。