增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：吧多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

    Next Sunday, the twenty-five of October, we are have an open day at our school. It's going to be about the environment, with kinds of fun things happen. Our geography teacher will show a documentary film about air pollute. Our science teacher is running a workshop with practical ideas on what to do with things can be recycled, like newspapers and box. Then in the evening Dr. Lynda Potter, a environmentalist, is going to give a talk. It will be about what everyone can do something to help the environment. They will also be books for sale about protecting the environment. I think it's going to be a real good day.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(_^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It was beautiful morning. I stepped outside from my apartment after breakfast. I saw two kids were watching people passing silent. Later I knew that they were there because sometimes people give him money or food on such cold weather. I told them to stay there and go back into my apartment, packed some food or gave it to them. Filling with great joy, they started eating quickly. I also gave them several bag of biscuits. They thanked to me again and again. I was happy I could give them some food, which could at least give them a few strength.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The world seems to be facing two problem. One is that too many people are dangerous over-weighted. This type of problem called obesity(肥胖症). Obesity is when a person have more than 25-30 percent of body fat. The other problem is a illness called anorexia(厌食症). This is when people are dangerously thin; we are less than 85% of their normal body weight. All of these problems are very serious because of the body cannot work properly when it is too fat or too thin. The heart, liver, kidneys and lungs will not be able to keep the body health.

    People can die from illnesses causing by being too fat or too thin.