增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold aparty to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. I'll try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. It's high time that I dosomething to repay them.

    How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours Sincerely

                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Jin

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear friends,

    It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekends in English study in the English Club. Although we have been member for a short period of time, we have made a great progress. That is why we are all very active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us improved our spoken English greatly so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My neighbor, Mr. Chen is one of those people which we call "volunteers". Every fortnight, he volunteers his service as the guide at the local aquarium(水族馆) to clean up the tanks. There are very danger creatures in these tanks, Mr. Chen has to be cautious with them. In the other hand, there are also friendly animals and Mr. Chen enjoys play with them underwater. If Mr. Chen works every two weeks, his colleagues know her perfectly. They find that he often stays late even after closing hours just make sure the place is clean and the fishes are feed. Mr. Chen says he takes pleasure in helping out because of he finds it most satisfying to be near the fishes.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble get along with your friends.Here is my advices.First,talk with your friends often.It is the good idea to share your happiness and sadness to them.Second,helping each other was very important.It's better for you to help your friends have trouble in study or daily life.And they will be help you when you need help.Third,learn to appreciate your friends' strengths.In this way,you can make really friends.Whether you follow my suggestions,I believe your friends will understand them better.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Many people who smoke say that smoking helps them think better. Therefore, I am afraid I cannot agree them. I am strong against smoking. First, smoking is bad for one's healthy. People who smoke often develop or even die of different diseases. Second, smoking polluted the air. People cannot work or study well in a room be full of smoke. Third, smoking wastes money. Every year, million of dollars are spent treat diseases caused by smoking. What we can see, smoking does more harm than good  and students should not pick out the habit.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Alice,

    I was delighted to receive your letter. Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me. I received it this morning. There is no doubt which it is of great help to me. I'm deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English. I've made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class. Next month I'll take trip to Australia, which is organizing by my school. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as many as possible. By the way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I'll send you more if I got any. I do hope you will have a good holiday.

Yours

Li Hua