增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear editor,

    I am Evan from Canada. Being the oldest child in the family has its disadvantages. First of all, I have to share all my toys with my young sisters. Of course, they don't need to return to the favor because I'm total uninterested in their things. Besides, they are always hanging around me. I just can't get moment's peace. At meals, I have to eat whichever is on the plate regardless of the taste. My sisters only try one bite if it's not our favorite food. In addition, when it comes to practice our musical instruments, I have to practice more than double the time. Worst of all, I got a larger quantity of housework. Comparing to them, I'm feeling rather annoyed. Can you please give me some advices?

Yours truly,

Evan Smith

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉;

修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I didn't realize the importance of working in groups since I was chosen monitor of my class in high school. At first, I did most of duties myself while other students cared few about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to my teacher and he gave me some advice of how to cooperate well with other. Thus I begin to realize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone to do his part in class.

    From my experience, I strong feel that it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me from trouble and make me work more efficiently. Therefore, we need the teamwork spirit in our lives.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    How are you getting along? I don't think this is a good idea to travel a lot and visit as many place as possible. Last July Bell paid a visit on Europe. Europe was very beautiful, but his holiday wasn't very nicely. He visited several countries, and was in each of the countries for only three days. He visited a good many places of interest, but was always in hurry. Though he returned from Europe, he was very tired. So I suggest that you spent your holiday in a different way. We had better travel with a friend to one country and to visit only one city at a time. You'll be able to have a good time.

Yours sincerely,

John

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：删除多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，从11处起不计分

    It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Xiamen, port city in Fujian Province. My favorite sport is swimming, so I make up my mind to swim in the sea one afternoon with my friend, Tom and Lisa.

    It was my first time to swim in the sea, with the waves come one after another to the shore and making huge noises. Facing the rough sea, I felt a bit thrilling and even wanted to give up at first. And when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water, my fear was gradually replaced by excitement. Finally, I joined in the swimmers. Now I still remember how wonderful I could swim in the sea that day.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday I was asked to send my grandmother to the school bus stop, because she is not able to walk through the snow with his walker. There was a mom walked with her little son in the same direction. The boy was screaming and crying all way. Before my grandmother left by bus, I walked back with the mom and she told me that the boy could make up sounds but no words at this point. I held up my hand to the boy, which was walking, and he took it. He was content with my hands while I chatted with his mom. I felt he trusted me. It made me very happily, too.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I clean out Dad's cupboard yesterday. There were two things I couldn't throw away: his work shirts and his two pairs of Red Wing boot. He couldn't remember birthdays or anniversaries, but he remembered the date on that he'd bought her first pair. I remember it either—April 16, day after Tax Day. What does a child do with her dad's most favorite boots? I think I will make a planter out of them or use them to storing something valuably. You can't throw away a man's favorite boots. You've got to keep them but pass them down.